Hi Melissa,
I enjoyed reading your blog post! Your writing was clear, engaging and organized. Your use of pictures and examples to support your writing stood out to me.I especially liked your personal example of your Reddit page and how it contributes to your PLN, which I thought was a very good visual representation of your PLN and how you utilize social platforms like Reddit in your PLN. I also enjoyed your additional information in ways beyond writing, such as your bridge of UDL guidelines and the University of Saskatchewan textbook, which provided additional information that readers can use beyond your explanation and description to further their understanding, as well as readers can see what UDL guidelines look like on an institutional level.
One thing I would suggest is incorporating more bullet points or tables to break up the writing in your posts. For example, in your UDL guidelines section, you could break up the three guidelines into bullet points instead of bolding them, which would make it slightly easier to read and that much more engaging for the reader!
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